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  • Changes: Explain what change you made to improve the plane. Why did you choose to make this change? Again a chance to use the word inference. What do you think ti will improve in the flight of the plane? Try to use the word prediction and also hypothesis. I really need help on fitting in the words.

    Answer:

    We did not change a lot to try to improve the plane; however we combined some ideas of other planes in order to make a big improvement. First of all, we changed the tip of the plane. It was used to be flat, but we modified it to a sharp point. We predicted that it will perk up but when we tested the result was not we were looking for. Then, we thought of modifying it again so then we thought of making the triangle smaller when folding up over the two flaps. Eventually, when we tested it again, it flew astonishingly.



  • * There should be paragraphs to separate the different things u wanna talk about.

    In attempt to improve the plane, we did not make many changes. We combined other some ideas from other planes. That was our improvement.

    We changed the tip of the plane. Intially, the tip of the plane was flat, but we modified it to be sharp. We made a hypothesis that it will perk up. However, when we tested it out, the result was not what we predicted it to be.
    After that, we modified it again. We made the triangle smaller when folding up over the two flaps.

    Finally, we tested it again. It flew astonishing. My 2nd hypothesis was correct.


  • ... but the result was not what we were looking for.

    According to our hypothesis, a more compact tip would improve the plane's flight pattern.

    Eventually, when we tested it again, it flew astonishingly well.







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